9/05/2007

Angel Baby

Under the bed?



No, they'll check their first.











The closet?






No, too risky.




In the bathroom?




No, too obvious.







I had to think quickly.








I hear their footsteps comming closer...









Closer screaming my name.








I quickly go under the bed.




















A drunk man goes in my room first;






"Where the fu** are you, bastard!?"






The drunk woman comes in following;






"Piece of sh**, child! I'm going to kill you!"


















They check the closet,

They run to the bathroom...














They come back into my room;














The woman calling my name sweetly,






The man searching;






flipping things over,
breaking things,

pounding on the wall.





















"The bed..." whispers the man...






"That bastard sh** better not be under there!" yells the woman.




















I was there silent;



creeped against the wall,

trembling in fear.




















I see eyes looking at me;






Glaring, then an evil laugh.






"Get the fu** over here!!" she yells.










Her nails seep into my skin;






pulling my leg,






ripping my pants shred by shred trying to get me.












I kick,

I fight,

I lose.

















She got me;
















I'm hanging by my neck,






she squeezes && the man laughs.



I can't even breathe.










Then the man slaps my face,






Hits my little stomach,






Punches me everywhere....
























I'm on the floor,






bleeding, crying...













The woman && man go away satisfied.






I hear their laughter as I close my eyes.










Everything goes silent,









I silently whisper to myself;






"I love you Mommy & Daddy, always...






No matter what, No matter what..."





















Everything goes silent,






The blood keeps comming out.

29 comments:

KAYLEE said...

OH GOD THAT POST SURPRISED ME:P

Sweetstickychewy said...

Wow..You kept me in suspense and reading. And the end hurts..:D

Angel Baby Indeeds..:D

Great STUFF!

Rajeev said...

U can do it for nefty or any other middle name u like !:P

Rajeev said...

Sad story!

oomi said...

suspence!
dear same do i. I also hate war so can i come along you?
to end it?

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

huh?
What type of horrible parents are these?

makes me squint in pain :S

`NEFTY said...

@ kay, sweet, ra, oomi
Thanks.

@ raaji
Reality in the real world.

akanksha said...

Sad...:-(
The child is a true angel...
actually,,every child is..

lemonade said...

painful..but beautiful

soul&body said...

so sad...:( those parents should not exist :(:(:(:(

`NEFTY said...

@ akan
I don't like kids but NO child should be treated this way.

@ lemon
Yep.

@ soul
Definitly, however, some do.

Sornie said...

First time visitor here and that is the most powerful short story I have read in quite some time.

utopia said...

that was disturbing.

`NEFTY said...

@ sornie & utopia
Yep, glimpses in reality.

Sam said...

jeez.. this one is so painful!!!

Hira said...

awww..poor child...sad sad..

vinay said...

tat was innovative!!way to go!!

MeMyself_n_I said...

oh god that was awfully disturbing.

Enemy of the Republic said...

Oh my GOD

`NEFTY said...

@ sam, hira, me-i, enemy
yups lol.

@ vin
thanks:]

Qurrat said...

Ok why was this posted in teh first place.

So depressing.

`NEFTY said...

@ qurrat
Well, let's see, it's my blog, I post whatever I want.

curryegg said...

This post really makes me wanna cry. I can feel the pain. Nice post..

`NEFTY said...

@ curry
Thank you.

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s.H.a.S.h.I said...

hmm.. very sad...some kids go thru so much torture in their childhood.. but i guess thts wht makes them strong in adult life..

chandnee said...

It hurts......badly....suspense till the end......

angry ballerina said...

Wow, I'm gonna go kill myself now, thanks Nefty.

Azathoth100 said...

Sad. But happens all the time. Makes me sick. Wonder what this tells us about humanity?