No, they'll check their first.
The closet?
No, too risky.
In the bathroom?
No, too obvious.
I had to think quickly.
I hear their footsteps comming closer...
Closer screaming my name.
I quickly go under the bed.
A drunk man goes in my room first;
"Where the fu** are you, bastard!?"
The drunk woman comes in following;
"Piece of sh**, child! I'm going to kill you!"
They check the closet,
They run to the bathroom...
They come back into my room;
The woman calling my name sweetly,
The man searching;
flipping things over,
breaking things,
pounding on the wall.
"The bed..." whispers the man...
"That bastard sh** better not be under there!" yells the woman.
I was there silent;
creeped against the wall,
trembling in fear.
I see eyes looking at me;
Glaring, then an evil laugh.
"Get the fu** over here!!" she yells.
Her nails seep into my skin;
pulling my leg,
ripping my pants shred by shred trying to get me.
I kick,
I fight,
I lose.
She got me;
I'm hanging by my neck,
she squeezes && the man laughs.
I can't even breathe.
Then the man slaps my face,
Hits my little stomach,
Punches me everywhere....
I'm on the floor,
bleeding, crying...
The woman && man go away satisfied.
I hear their laughter as I close my eyes.
Everything goes silent,
I silently whisper to myself;
"I love you Mommy & Daddy, always...
No matter what, No matter what..."
Everything goes silent,
The blood keeps comming out.
29 comments:
OH GOD THAT POST SURPRISED ME:P
Wow..You kept me in suspense and reading. And the end hurts..:D
Angel Baby Indeeds..:D
Great STUFF!
U can do it for nefty or any other middle name u like !:P
Sad story!
suspence!
dear same do i. I also hate war so can i come along you?
to end it?
huh?
What type of horrible parents are these?
makes me squint in pain :S
@ kay, sweet, ra, oomi
Thanks.
@ raaji
Reality in the real world.
Sad...:-(
The child is a true angel...
actually,,every child is..
painful..but beautiful
so sad...:( those parents should not exist :(:(:(:(
@ akan
I don't like kids but NO child should be treated this way.
@ lemon
Yep.
@ soul
Definitly, however, some do.
First time visitor here and that is the most powerful short story I have read in quite some time.
that was disturbing.
@ sornie & utopia
Yep, glimpses in reality.
jeez.. this one is so painful!!!
awww..poor child...sad sad..
tat was innovative!!way to go!!
oh god that was awfully disturbing.
Oh my GOD
@ sam, hira, me-i, enemy
yups lol.
@ vin
thanks:]
Ok why was this posted in teh first place.
So depressing.
@ qurrat
Well, let's see, it's my blog, I post whatever I want.
This post really makes me wanna cry. I can feel the pain. Nice post..
@ curry
Thank you.
wow that made me feel like crying...
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hmm.. very sad...some kids go thru so much torture in their childhood.. but i guess thts wht makes them strong in adult life..
It hurts......badly....suspense till the end......
Wow, I'm gonna go kill myself now, thanks Nefty.
Sad. But happens all the time. Makes me sick. Wonder what this tells us about humanity?
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